Accident Scene

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I tell myself
I hope he stays away
I’m better off
with a simpler life
If he doesn’t call me
I won’t call him
if I don’t hear his voice
if I don’t see his body
if I don’t meet his eyes
I’ll be happy

over the course
of five days
or a week
I convince myself
that it’s true;
I don’t need him
I don’t love him anymore
but then the phone rings
“Are you gonna be there?”
and I reluctantly say “yes”
and I wonder
why I can’t stop
staring at the accident
and the hand outside the sheet.

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
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A seemingly pleasant poem of being unable to resist ~ then the shocker last line. Marvelous word play.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

When you think your life's a wreck

You can't resist the wrecking ball.

Maria2394Maria2394over 18 years ago
hmmmmmmm

I wasnt exactly drawn in with the first part, but kept reading because of Jim's review and was pleased. The end is *almost* the whole poem. good work

jthserrajthserraover 18 years ago
Your poem is mentioned

in the New Poem Review thread: http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=15408586#post15408586

jim : )

jthserrajthserraover 18 years ago
A prosy feel to the phrasing

but an incredible punch at the end that will knock the breath out of most any reader. Powerful.

jim : )

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